Fuck Editors
By John Ogden
The narrative is jam-packed
With tech terms, a fairly quick read
Fairly minimalist, the combat descriptions.
But not really an improvement
Given the narrative distance.
It’s clear the author cares about his characters;
Unfortunately, I found it hard to do the same,
It’s trash, it’s trash
Don’t send it here
All the characters sound the same.
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John Ogden was conceived of a government form and a passing mailbox. He lives somewhere out in the woods of a rural land more akin to the fantasy realms of literature than real life, and his favorite dirt bikes will always be the broken ones.
By John Ogden
The narrative is jam-packed
With tech terms, a fairly quick read
Fairly minimalist, the combat descriptions.
But not really an improvement
Given the narrative distance.
It’s clear the author cares about his characters;
Unfortunately, I found it hard to do the same,
It’s trash, it’s trash
Don’t send it here
All the characters sound the same.
- - -
John Ogden was conceived of a government form and a passing mailbox. He lives somewhere out in the woods of a rural land more akin to the fantasy realms of literature than real life, and his favorite dirt bikes will always be the broken ones.
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